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Piece of Heaven


Remember how Romeo and Juliet starts….
In  fair  Verona where our scene is set.?
Well I was in that very square
Where the balcony from that famous love scene stands
I’m in awe at how beautiful it is.
I close my eyes
Imagine myself calling out for Romeo
I open my eyes and I’m still on the ground
Hopefully I  will find my  Romeo soon.

Author notes

3) anything about romeo and juliet

Over the summer I went to Italy on vacation and in Verona I got to see the balcony from the balcony scene in the play.

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  • misshugglebugglez
    November 23, 2008
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    nicely written!!! great job, i liked the simplicity of the poem. " i close my eyes imagine myself calling out for romeo..." your poem has great, sweet imagination and wonder. i enjoyed reading it! good luck in the contest! btw, you are so lucky you've gotten to go to italy! =)
    hugs,
    adria/ confuzzled angel