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Her Image

Missing image
How not to admire beauty, tell me how?
All admiration I see that is all
Allow eyes to wonder I can't allow
Fall in love by photo, how can I fall?

Gamine is she, impish charming gamine
I am entranced by images of her eye
Scene of reality never truly seen
Lie of fantasy dreams wherein I lie

Round face circular eyes framed golden round
Young captured frozen still forever young
Bound to my mind; her beauty is bound
Unsung my love song departed unsung

Lie of fantasy dreams wherein I lie
I am entranced by images of her eye

Author notes

Written in the Shadow Sonnet Form invented by the incredibly beautiful and talented Amera M. Andersen.

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 27, 2008
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    Who doesn't love Audrey Hepburn A lovely write about her and a great take on the prompt.


  • stavykm gold member
    November 25, 2008
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    Just Beautiful

    This Shadow Sonnet Form looks so hard to do. You have done it beautifully in this poem. I'm in awe really of your choice of words in admiring the beautiful woman she is in this picture. Best wishes in the contest.

    Wishing You Many Blessings
    My Friend
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie


  • Amera gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    What a beautiful Shadow! You have woven the form into pure beauty as it descrives beauty. I am so honored to see the form used this way.

    Love,
    Amera♥


    • melphleg gold member
      November 24, 2008
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      hehe Audrey wasn't the only gamine beauty I had in mind as I wrote this.