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Just Simply

I know I should have said it
just one more time.

I know you needed to hear it,
but something told me,
you didn't want to hear it,
not from me.

I know I should have,
I could have...

I wanted to, but
never did.

I don't know why
I never said it,
just one more time,

I hope you know it now,
I hope it finds a way to
reach you...

It is simple, it is true
it is just simply

I love you.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 27, 2008

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    Beautiful

    In the look often if speaks louder than words . We in this day and age forget to see the expressions of another and the love that radiates from that look .


  • Amera gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    Your love poems are fantastic! They are direct and to the point showing a realness that can only come from the heart.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • stavykm gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    So Beautiful

    Oh this one just pierced my heart. What a beautiful poem and so sad too.

    It is simple, it is true
    it is just simply

    I love you.

    Oh I know we both lost loved ones and I could so relate to your poem. This is priceless and I'm sure he heard this from Heaven above. I just love you my sweet sister.

    Wishing You Many Blessings
    Much Love Always
    Kelle Marie


  • EmeraldDreams
    November 21, 2008
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    Beautiful honey!

    I think a message like that will always reach the person it's meant for. xx


  • FearlessChic
    November 20, 2008
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    Love this. The ending is perfect. Great job as always <3 xoxo


  • Desire gold member
    November 20, 2008

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    Precious~

    Aaaaaaaaaaw that four letter words palpitates the Heart
    Powerful stuff here Beautiful One~
    Speaks Volumes and treads lightly onto heavenly soil
    Another one to swells the eyes
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Fayne Witchwood
    November 20, 2008

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    So sad... deep, like everything else of yours I've read. I can really feel the emotions coming from this poem. Another great one.

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