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Mind

From the depth
Of my mind
Comes twisted words
Like twisted twine

Author notes

GRRRRRRRRRRR THIS IS MINE I LOVERES IT NO TAKEY OR YOU SHALL............ DIE!

A contest entry

i have not been able to write for awhile so im rusty if its bad tell me

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  • Sound of Rain
    November 20, 2008

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    Great job!! I think you did a nice job here. It was a little short, but it is very nice!! keep up the good work and good luck in the contest!!


  • Rhapsody
    November 20, 2008

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    I like it, short. I did one that was like this once, but it was something about love. I really sucked then. lol. goodluck