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love and memory

she stands and waits,

a friend, a filmilar face,

solder, war, patience in the waiting,

what cometh?
a home with the warm glow of rememberance,

long lasting,
a thought towards the making,

a spirit not knowing, yet still in spirit,
longing for her husband, yet past forgotten...

a still frame in time... she remains still

an image, a shadow, a ghost...

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  • Rowan gold member
    November 25, 2008
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    Very haunting, love the end. Thanks for entering.