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The paradox of Irony

 

 

I asked, myself,

for exactly whom,

does the bells of hell toll.

Exposing naked mockery

of our saint and sinner souls.

Un-raveling twisted clarity,

for all to witness and behold.

Just another day,

in Court, assembled in a line,

home-less, prostitutes, drug dealers

remote and penniless.

 

Dis-illusioned innocence

proclaiming guilty verdicts.

Deafening humanity

too weary to absorb

the paradoxes of  irony.

 

Honorable robes of accountability

fearlessly define the cost of restitution

exhibitng our values as just society.

Gavels the price….

Two hundred bucks

and you will be a free man.

His immediate response;

“Damn judge, it’s cold out there,

was hoping you’d feed me

safely locked away,

warmed today.”

 

Defining the benchmarks of  irony,

nakedly exhibiting our values as a society.

I asked myself..for exactly whom, do the bells of hell toll,

feeling ever so weary in my heart and soul.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


  
  
 


 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Contest prompt: Irony

online dictionary defines:
banter, burlesque, contempt, contrariness, criticism, derision, humor, incongruity, jibe, mockery, mordancy, paradox, quip, raillery, repartee, reproach, ridicule, sardonicism, satire, taunt, twist, wit antiphrasis, humor, mockery, paradox, sarcasm, satire, twist.

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  • morgana raven Greeters member
    December 23, 2008

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    Dis-illusioned innocence

    proclaiming guilty verdicts.

    Deafening humanity

    too weary to absorb

    the paradoxes of irony.


    This stanza was utterly fantastic. I read this bit alone at least five times. the rest of the poem was of course quite brilliant itself, but with these lines it make it for me and im not sure why, its just the bit i kept going back to.
    Great work. really great work.
    Laura.


  • Glasyalabolas
    December 16, 2008
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    I love the small repetition at the beginning and end of this piece, it is an excellent device when used well, but oft goes unappreciated.

    This is a very well composed social commentary, lively and avoids being preachy.

    Congrats on bronze.

    Good write.


  • Glasyalabolas
    November 20, 2008
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    Many thanks for the entry, however could you change the title of the piece to the same as the prompt please?

    Many, many thanks.

    (ps. I will comment properly when the contest is ending, just incase you might get worried why it's taking so long for me to comment on the piece )