She comes home from school
With tears built in her eyes
Shes sick of liveing this way
Shes done with all the lies
So to calm her down
She locks her bedroom door
And takes a seat down on that
All too familiar floor
She takes the razor out
And slides it across her skin
She always knew he would get to her
It was a fight she couldnt win
But this time it was different
This time the cuts much too deep
As she struggles to stop the bleeding
She begins to weep..
And then her mom came home
And found her on the floor
She finally escaped the pain
She couldnt deal anymore
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this is amazing
i loved it
it's so awesome
i have a few like this
but twist and kink is one i think
you'd like, i really liked this though
good write! -
great write xx
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Grrreat
I like it a lot you did great
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0MG THiiS iiiS SO0O0 BEAUTiiFULL!!!
ii CANN T0TALLY RELATEE ANDD THE EMOTii0N IN THISS IS INTENSEE AND BEAUTiiFULL!!
GREAT WRITEE
^^)
-MELiiJELii
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great
loved it it was so well done -
i lovedd it
its a wonderful poem, and i really enjoyed it..
i can relate to it aswel..i hope u start feeling better hun!
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amazing!!
its like my life... =/
lol, never mind...but this is amazing, i totally relate, well done
xox Keep it up!! xox
<333
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