The last seal has been open,
The silence is deafening,
An half hour seems like an eternity,
To a waiting child
Listening...
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A daunting poem that seems to reflect upon messages given to mankind a long time ago. Today few still are aware they have been passed on, most prefer to persist in whatever they do that has nothing to do with the essence of matters behind the prophesies that urged the messenger to share with mankind what was shown to him in visions. It is utterly regrettable that important parts of the past have been erased from conscience, although that too was foretold. It announces a future that is partly the consequence of what was forgotten and as a result not lived by. Today almost anything can be hidden in plain sight without anyone noticing what is there. From some perspectives it is inevitable for that reason that existence as it unfolds must come to an end; there simply isn't anything left that justifies the way man lives. The solution to the problem, that man in his ignorance allowed to take place, will be as horrid as the nature of his conduct. The aware brace themselves as the world will have to take the consequence of its failures to understand the meaning of its existence. Thank you precious soul, for creating and sharing these thoughts that will have immense implication.
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I like it. Overall an almost haiku feel, being brief and leaving much unsaid, but painting the picture enough that the reader can fill in the rest. This is a good thing.
But, "deafening silence" is a bit of a cliche. I feel you could make that more original and thus, stronger. This sort of poem (short, evocative) calls for it. -
All had better heed the warning! Yes! The time is at hand. I love the fact that you placed this inevitable event in a "child's listening" ears.
Thanks for the reminder to get my house in order Sis'.
Many Blessings & Much Love ♥
Renee
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Doom on the horizon ot seems. The Rapture and the end on the Mayan calendar. You see so much more them most.
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Potent,
So much said within these divine lines.
Thanks for sharing your prophetic soul! *angel*Love your way! :f
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