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hello...






anybody there?




why is the room always empty?


and i'm left
listening
to the echos of my conversations
turned to monalogues

drifting through cyberspace
in my rowboat
built from waking dreams and insomnia

hoping to find another
to share a current with

for maybe just a moment

untill the real world
calls
and i must sail on again


copy and paste


my muse is set free
all because
the room was empty

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  • piccola silver member
    December 4, 2008

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    this happens to me a lot. Even in the mall I'll be walking along with my hubby and we're talking then all of a sudden he's gone and I'm talking to myself. I just turn to someone near and say, "don't you think so?" LOL


  • Yorkshire Rose
    November 21, 2008
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    wow, this poem is so creatively done