Have you ever woken,
With your make-up running down your face?
Sheets soking wet from the tears?
blood streaked down your sheets,
arms still bleeding?
wishing you wernt you?
hoping that this is just a nightmare?
wishing to wake in the light of day,
pretty as can be.
with the one you love right beside you?
have you ever cut so deep,
that you didnt kno wether to cry or scream?
hoping that you did not cut to deep,
but inside hoping that you will die?
blood gushing,
the dizziness coming to you.
you fall out in the middle of it all,
but hope that when you wake up,
everything will be alright,
for once in your life
Have you ever loved someone so much,
That you would give up your whole life for them?
Hoping that they will be yous forever and ever,
Untill the end of time?
Wishing that life wasnt so short,
and hoping that it will be fair to you for once?
because the other parts of life were hard as can be.
knowing that you deserve more than what you have ever recieved.
i deal with this,
the cuts of my lie of a life.
A contest entry
- How do you deal with....? by Lonely Christina.
900 points, ended December 4, 2008, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
HOPE U LIKE THIS CHRISTINA
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OMG!! i love this babe!!it is so.. wow!! im like..... whoa! speechless!! i love it so much!!
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aww you really liked it? this was easy cuz it is like my life... :))
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I LOVED IT!!!!
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loved it i mean lol
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glad you lived it love
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no.. didnt like.
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awwww thanks babe!! no go read more...
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lol! i am reading more!! lol!
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really deep .......
really good write ...
"have you ever cut so deep,
that you didnt kno wether to cry or scream?
hoping that you did not cut to deep,
but inside hoping that you will die?"
these are some powerful liness
"Have you ever loved someone so much,
That you would give up your whole life for them? "
these lines i can totally relate to ..
good luck
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thank you lol i try to do my best :))
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this is the truth 4 me as well and i can answer yes to all of ur questions...the emotions and the details of this are amazing. i loved reading it. my fav part was "Sheets soking wet from the tears?
blood streaked down your sheets,
arms still bleeding?" wow thanks 4 ur entry babe! i love you
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