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Emotionalism

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                                      l%e%a%v%i%n%g

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            l/ a/ u/ g/ h/ i/ n/g      or      c:[ r:[ y:[ i:[ n:[ g:[  !!!!!

Author notes

Proverbs 4:23 Keep thy heart [mind] with all diligence; for out of it are the issues of life.

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Comments


  • Echos in Silence
    August 10

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    i like both the visual and wording.... well done :3


  • katilyn101
    August 10

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    lol i like how it looks, but what does it say i mean i cant really understand what it says lol

    • Kathleen a Nazarene
      August 11
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      LOL....

      I know what you mean! The first time I saw 'Dirty Pretty' I said: WHAT? The poem: Emotionalism can cloud the brain leaving you laughing or crying! A one liner...
      Thanks for taking a peek & your comment. Now this is no longer an orphan poem.