i stand, expectant, waiting, my tail grazing my legs.
Before me a squire, a handful of oats.
At each side, house retainers stroking my flanks.
The space is crowded, strange colours, garish costumes.
But i am calm, the air on my skin cooling and reassuring.
Soft bridle rubs against my cheeks.
Scents of oil and leather reminding me that I have been tamed.
The bit in my mouth constricting, yet comforting.
i feel set apart from the revellers, special.
They do not know the thrill that surges through my blood.
The squire gently pulls my reins and i lower my head.
Drawing sweet oats into my mouth with feverish lips.
The dryness heightening the physicality of it all.
Four hands continue to stroke my sides, sending shudders through my skin.
But where is my Master, the one who keeps my reins in His heart?
The noise lessens, people stop moving.
The crowd parts and there He stands.
Dick Turpin, highwayman, hero, lover.
His black cape swirls as He strides through the room.
my heart pounds as His presence washes over all.
Approaching, He nods to the squire, who steps back.
Taking the soft leather reins in His hand He looks deep into my eyes.
His breath sweet as i inhale Him.
The two retainers nod to Him, acknowledging that i am His.
They move away and fade into the crowd.
The Dark Highwayman holds my reins high and steps forth.
Leading me through the parted crowd.
Admiring looks falling upon us both.
my Master’s back is straight and true.
His demeanour one of natural control.
A full circuit of the hall and then out of the door.
Cold night air enervating me as i follow my Master.
Knowing that He leads me to my stable.
It is dark but warm, redolent of clean straw and comforting familiarity.
Guiding me to my stall He gestures for me to kneel.
i feel the roughness of the ground with heightened sensitivity.
my position satisfying, beneath Him.
i grip the bit with my teeth, forcing myself to stay still.
The soft stroke of a riding crop makes me twitch.
my spine arching as He draws back on my reins.
The crop strikes and warm pain enlivens my flank.
Wetness begins to appear.
He pulls my tail to one side and enters me.
i am filled, both holes satisfied.
One my Master’s manhood, the other the plug that holds my tail.
He thrusts deeper and deeper.
Owning me, controlling me, guiding me.
His stomach presses against my tail and the plug drives deeper.
Legs shaking, i grip the rough wood of the stall.
Almost swooning with the pleasure of giving myself.
There is nowhere but here, no time but now.
Belonging is all that there is.
His Mastery makes me complete.
His thrusts gain speed and i whinny as waves of pleasure wash over me.
Grinding my teeth to prevent words of love from escaping.
Hot seed fills me and my mind is filled with coruscating fire.
His hands grip me tighter as we ride the wave together.
And then stillness, silence, love.
He withdraws and i feel a sense of utter loss.
Until His hand strokes me once more.
He holds my reins and looks into my eyes.
Smiling, He shows His approval.
i close my eyes and rest my head upon His shoulder.
Proud to be a pony.
Proud to belong to Him.
Author notes
The task was to write a piece that involved 5 people in Pony Play at a costume ball featuring Dick Turpin. Although I am in no way submissive, I felt that the piece should be written from the pony’s perspective, so here is what I came up with …
Please tell me what you think
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*pale face turns red*
This searched proved excellent
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: The Highwayman
This piece tugged hard and though I am not as talented when it comes to story writing. I base on how it makes me feel, how reader friendly it is to digest but most of all- did it have cohesiveness I thoroughly enjoyed the story for You brought forth in a unique perspective with emotion that could be felt not just written While I was reading which I do several times before making a comment~ Images come to me in many forms~ when taking in Your words: I was able to envision the scenario, see scenes unfold with mutual understanding within all parties involved-
You had a challenge of incorporating 5 people- and did so quite creatively for I went back to count, the characters melted into the scene. I would have certainly found it difficult myself to pull off
Execution Magnificent
Energy within Your words kept me hanging on from beginning to end - Now I digest reads in a different manner than some- energy exuded is a strong factor along with the different array-level of emotions You portrayed well plus sentence structure, grammar consistent- re: submissive and Master
I won't write a novel of a comment this time but in summary
Magnificent story entered ~
Challenge Matrix:
spelling/grammar/punctuation- 20
presentation/creativity- 20
how well you handled the challenge-20
"grab me" effect (how much did we enjoy reading this piece)- 20
overall-20
For a total of 100 points
Sensual images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Hope to read more...
Best wishes to You in the challenge Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Perfection... i couldn't see any flaws and i enjoyed the story as much as i enjoyed the way it is written.
spelling/grammar=20
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presentation=20
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I can only agree with Ktulu. I could not find anything wrong with this. It was hot and it got me all excited due to my little fetish when it comes to this specific aspect of play.
Spelling/ grammar/ punctuation: 20
Creativity/ presentation: 20
Grab me effect: 20
How well you handled the challenge: 20
Overall: 20
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I must say you did an outstanding job on your take with this.. I loved everything about it.
Congrats for it is awesome.
Riftkin
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You DO know how a submissive feels!!!
lol!
i love You SO much!
thank You for sharing Your talent with me (a mere mortal )
When i read words that come from You it all seems to make sense and my heart pulls along with the frown ... sigh
i love You
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Please don't frown My love.
Life will get better, I promise.
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'He pulls my tail to one side and enters me'
kinky...
extremely kinky...
never read that before...
does it really happen?
Gal
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Thanks for the comment.
"Pony Play" is a widely enjoyed part of BDSM. Some people enjoy it (as they do "puppy play") because it gives them more of a rationale for giving up control. Others just have fun and enjoy it
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What can one say other than this was pure perfection. I am glad that you were able to get this in and also, it was well worth the wait.
spelling/grammar/punctuation=20
how well you handled the challenge=20
presentation=20
grab me effect=20
overall=20
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Thank you for the very gratifying comment (and the 100 points).
Now, if only I hadn't been tired and distracted the last time
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