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Frustrated

I laugh in the face of fear
but I'm scared to death when you're around
and I'm so sick of subtlety
because you just don't understand
and I try so loudly to explain
but your presence always overpowers me.
It's downright pathetic that I can't get you out of my head
and completely useless to even try.
Every time I even attempt to get closer
You push me further than where I started
I get so close to giving up
but every reason I have to turn away
has a stronger reason to come running back to you.

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  • Erica Carnea
    January 25
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    amazing write
    i love this
    love always
    xx


  • Endiku Lei Kikona
    November 20, 2008

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    Awesome

    Love is a frustrating thing Mana..or at least it can be at times...Wonderful poem hopefully your frustration goes away in a good way


  • Silvos. silver member
    November 20, 2008

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    That does seem very frustrating. Just the fact that when you try it's useless, but you can't stop trying because being turned down is better than giving up completely. I have felt this before on many occasions. This was well written.

    Silvos.