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Mind

Reaching,
ripping, tearing,
disgusting fear.

Holding, nothing,
killing, murderous
shadow.

No light.
No hope.
darkness and destruction
of trust and
lies,
deception.

Tangled mess.
Mind.
My mind,
that tangled mess.

Fate's web.
Nothing.
Nothing!

Nothing.

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Comme tojours, Apprecier.
~~FlawedPerfection~~

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  • Silvos. silver member
    November 20, 2008

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    I like the structure of this, it is different than what I'm used to reading. I like the repetition towards the end of the word nothing, it does the necessary stress of the fact it is nothing. Well written!

    Silvos.