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Walking Angel

The angel walking in the snow
hold a sertain flow of hope

she hold out here hand
for you to take

she helps you up
and sets you down

back unto your feet
the angel watches as you sleep

The angel walking in the snow
gives the slightest raine of hope

A contest entry

this is a special poem just for my grand friend Rhthm Child

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 13, 2008

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    Yes this is life..and this is love ..which makes us living..which learn us to joy..well done..thanks for sharing..


  • Sandygram silver member
    December 1, 2008

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    So lovely are your words. A wonderful take on the picture. I do believe there are many angels around us. Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck. Your poem was a pleasure to read this morning. Take care, Sandy