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such a nice picture...still

she is waiting
to be touched
to be conquered
to give in
to be disappointed
to kick you in the teeth

A contest entry

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  • Sandygram
    December 1, 2008

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    Your words are so true for many in love. Great imagery. Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck. Your poem was a pleasure to read this morning. Take care, Sandy


  • Pearl-1
    November 23, 2008
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    love it
    too right in all
    to kick you in the teeth
    love that line
    brill poem
    good luck in the contest
    June


  • melphleg gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    Yes, that is what happens often at least to me.


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    powerful with a little scorn good luck