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Mystic Ballerina.

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Mystic ballerina
dancing through illusion
painting steps of haven dreams
inside her blue profusion.

Robed inside her nakedness
gossamer delight
dances through tomorrow
enchanted, shimmered, bright.

Twilight sparkled princess
rhythmical ballet
mystic ballerina
dance with me this day.



                                       
                                       
                                       

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  • Sandygram silver member
    December 1, 2008

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    What a beautiful poem. Nice take on the prompt. Love the rhyming. Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck. Your poem was a pleasure to read. Take care, Sandy


  • Jesann gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    Wonderful rhyme and flow.
    You have painted a very pretty picture here, I like it.
    A lovely take on the pic prompt.


  • Quabben
    November 20, 2008
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    Excellent

    Your words match the picture perfectly. Good to read.