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Don't Look Now

Chances are everything will fade into nothingness.

They will recall how much time was wasted,

secrets hidden for centuries to come.

 

The light flashed capturing what once was between the gods.

You swam away to save your soul from decaying

but where will she be tomorrow without you there to guide?

 

Pictures everywhere reminding, taking, breaking the bones.

Each carrying a piece of her heart around for you to laugh at.

 

The story behind each brings back hatred.

Vomiting up love to heal from lacking damage,

you said you would never leave.

 

Your photograph sits in my pocket,

I believe you'll be back

to finish what you cracked.

 

Don't forget to smile for the camera.

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 27, 2008

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    Great ending! Gave this write a cynical feel, of having been hurt and yet wishing that person back.
    Nicely done.


    • doyouloveit
      November 27, 2008
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      funny enough the person did come back and yet again more changes took place leaving us emptier than we ever thought possible thank you for the contest it let me release some things


  • mcw120588
    November 21, 2008
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    absolutely loved the end good job as always and good luck


  • Silvos. silver member
    November 20, 2008

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    I like that last line, it ends. This poem bears a strong message with an even stronger text. I really enjoyed reading this. Great luck to you in the contest you've entered.

    Silvos.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 20, 2008

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    this is a strong poem, i like the images it paints in the mind, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest.

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