Silly as it sounds, I love the way you sleep,
The way your hair flutters gently from your breath,
The peace that smoothes your brow,
The gentle kitten's purr
That passes your resting lips
As you snuggle close and closer
Like a lost little piscín*
Finally loved within my arms...
Author notes
For my beloved Wh. Tá mé chomh doirte sin duit, mo piscín de croi!
* "piscín" is Irish Gaelic for "kitten". It's pronounced, "pish-een".
A contest entry
- Passing A Note To All Poets by Dalaney.
750 points, ended November 23, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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The background is beautiful and so is the love note.
Thank you so much for entering my contest. Love, Lane
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