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l.o.v.e {each other to forgive}

{you have no idea}
how i trip all over my words,
whenever you're around.

{how much i love you}
is just simply amazing,
it overfills my heart and soul.

{but if you did}
decide to forgive,
i'd never let you regret it.

{i'd take your breath away}
just so you'd know
how I feel when i'm with you.

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You have no idea how much I love you. But if you did, I'd take your breath away.



Never pretend to a love
which you do not actually feel,
for love is not ours to command.
'Tis the most tender part of love,
each other to forgive.

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  • wanderingstarlet
    November 20, 2008

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    i so love your writing. it's pretty

    three mrs. clappies for you! (who ever said they weren't chickydoo's? you can't see their privates!)


    • Emm Jayy
      November 20, 2008
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      True. But they could still be guys.
      They might have... things!



      ... and thank you!


      • wanderingstarlet
        November 20, 2008
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        i'm just changin it up a bit cuz seriously there's some super flippin sexists out there! anywho... mrs. kruse just basically told katy to quit singing. hahahahaha