Loud voices inside of me
screams from my soul
Crying to be heard
but silent to the world
Holding my feelings deep inside
with no one to listen
Falling further into myself
deep down in my own private hell
Even if someone could hear me
they could never understand
My personal pain
bleeding inside my being
River of black
running through my veins
Flowing freely
through a stone pump
Controlling my every thought
consuming me completely
Unable to release my burden
for fear of hurting you again
Author notes
Third Prompt ~ My words scream as my lips seal shut.
A contest entry
- Different Prompts, Different People... A challenge....INVITE ONLY!!! by Angelflower.
700 points, ended December 11, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Struggling to find my muse lately :(
Comments
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Very heartfelt and intense. Something that I thought overtook the prompt, which is a good thing in my opinion. Your poetic voice screamed with this write, thank you very much for sharing.
Angel
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Thank You
Thank you sis! Feels good to vent through writing. It helps heal the soul
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Wow!!! I think this is pretty good. It shows allot of emotion and talent. The words flow wonderfully. You are a good writer!! keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more from you!!
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Thank you
Thank you so very much for your wonderful comment
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