Fingers stroked,
Ebony and ivory …
C major lullabies
Made me Leap
When I walked.
But among
The majors,
Were minors …
The last dance,
The last drink …
When I think about it,
I was never that good
At the piano.
Author notes
pic prompt - uniqely- Scarred
A contest entry
- PIF Weekend Quickie by ChunkyC.
800 points, ended November 24, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I really like where you took this poem and this picture. I'm a junior, but I plan on majoring in music. So I liked the "fancy" music words you used. I liked how you used the "ebony and ivory", I tend to refer to the keys in this way too. Great write, and good job. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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thank you i'm glad you nliked this piece
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Enjoyable...
I love the piano...not so good myself either. But this piece on the other hand is exceptionally penned. I enjoyed the contrasts. The whole of it was wonderful. Thanks for sharing. ~
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thank you glad you liked this,
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really cool. well done on the take of the prompt. all the best
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