tasting the rainbow
each and every day
from my heart my comments say
purple has a nice chewy grape flavor
those are the comments I give when I return a favor
green are nice and sour like a lime
sometimes are for comments with cliche rhymes
orange is a color flavor I love
I give these comments
on poems from above
like baby angles and lost loved ones
I cherish them
Red skittles are cherry
sometimes I give random comments
to friends, sometimes Kari
yellow are sour
comments I give when
the poem just does't make any sense
or have any power
these are the Surreal Skittles
that exist in my mind
every comment has a flavor
you will find
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A contest entry
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Skittels are the best candy ever! Thank you for all your comments on my poetry and great write! I can't wait to dive into what you've been writing. Its been a while.
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this is different... in a good way... its strange rhyme
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Yeah, this did give me a chuckle too. I should print this out and put it over my computer as a guide.
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I love this!
I've laughed harder at this than any of the other entries so far. Thanks for taking a chance with this one.
Perfect entry.
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Wow, this was awesome!!!
I love how you described all the skittles and the flavors. I especially liked how you said what kinds of comments you would give. I would say this comment is kind of grape, I am sort of returning a favor...
Anyway this had nice imagery and left me craving skittles!!
Thank you for donating points to my contest!! I appreciate it
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This is a really cute poem Amy. I noticed on the 4th paragraph and the third line *angles* should have been *angels* This is really good. Keep up the good work and never stop writing. Let me know if you ever need anything
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Delicious! A wonderfully creative and tasty write.
I think you've captured your self
Bravo.
Ken
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lol i love this!
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You nailed this one! I love the light hearted and playful tone of your words. the imagery is perfect and the BG is a wonderful choice. Thanks for sharing.
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