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Majestic Perfection

Standing with grace, alone in a field,
the essence of valor, God’s glory revealed.
A stark silhouette through storm scattered skies.
A ray of hope drenched in a gorgeous sunrise.

Eloquently crafted for the world to behold,
like a solitary soldier, so masterfully bold.
With arms outstretched, uniquely designed,
peaceful, pristine, exactly aligned.

Patiently waiting to bud in the spring,
another year past, another trunk ring.
The morning mist painting a canvas reflection,
the perfect tree cast in majestic perfection.

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  • Abnormal
    January 17
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    Nice write. Well done and good luck in the contest!


  • Wind Walker
    December 15, 2008
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    Well Done

    Love the illusions and masterful protrail of how it is
    Congrats on the Gold
    Wind Walker


    • WordsDoMatter
      December 17, 2008
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      thank you

      I very much appreciate your time and your comments - Kevin


  • Jesann gold member
    December 7, 2008
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    Sigh...Just beautiful !!!
    Wonderful rhyme and flow.
    Well done.

    • WordsDoMatter
      December 10, 2008
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      Thanks

      what a cool response for a writer to get. I am touched... thanks - Kevin


  • butterflywriter
    December 7, 2008
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    lovely piece, great flow...

    good luck in the contest


    • WordsDoMatter
      December 10, 2008

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      Thanks

      for reading and reviewing... I have a thing about trees. (though I'm not a tree-hugger), they are just beautiful, and each one unique.- Kevin


      • butterflywriter
        December 10, 2008

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        I AM a tree hugger...

        I only make class sets of exams and the kids have to write on an answer sheet in my classroom

        • WordsDoMatter
          December 13, 2008
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          thanks

          i'm from a family of teachers, I appreciate what you do - Kevin


  • xXchellXx
    December 7, 2008

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    :)

    thankyou for entering, i love this poem, it flows beautifully and naturally. good luck in the contest.
    God bless


    • WordsDoMatter
      December 10, 2008
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      Thanks

      I have always been intrigued by trees... this one seemed to fit. Thanks for reviewing - Kevin


  • Olivias Violin
    November 26, 2008
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    Beautiful!

    • WordsDoMatter
      December 1, 2008
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      Thanks

      for reviewing Majestic Perfection, I appreciate your kindness. Kevin

    • WordsDoMatter
      November 28, 2008
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      Thanks

      for reading... and the consise, but meaningful reply. - Kevin


  • Frodofan silver member
    November 21, 2008

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    Lovely

    I love how you have described this scene. I can really envision it all. I wish it were real, I could be there, and take a photograph of it. Great job painting a picture with words and I also like the "another trunk ring" part.

    A wonderful ode to nature.

    Thanks for entering.


    • WordsDoMatter
      November 28, 2008
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      Thanks

      I watch for those "perfect" trees wherever I am... have some awesome pictures... thanks for reading - Kevin (green newbie)

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