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Whispers In The Dark

dwelling in the shadows
my silver eyes seek
my pale skin almost glowing in the moonlight
placing my hands on an old elm
my pentacle necklace tapping the tree twice
as a shiver runs up my bare spine the chilled wind
blowing my midnight black hair from my pale skinned back
a black silver winged moth landing on my left shoulder
whispering his voice in my ear
my bare body barley shielded from the wind
covering my chest as i kneel down before the tree
i draw my spell circle in the black sand with my finger tip's
placing my hand in the center
speaking some demon tongue
voices
speaking my name
calling out to me
to come to them

Author notes

"I believe in the unknown"

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  • Passionate Phoenix
    November 20, 2008

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    this is a very mysterious and carefully written piece. a few spelling errors but nevertheless a pleasant piece to read. good use of layout technique and i like your use of description.

    And pail is spelt as 'pale'

    well done and good luck xxx