I am a bullet shot from a loaded gun,
I am a victim of circumstance,
I am, I am.
You are the mind that is ever blue,
You are tainted and damaged
You are, you are.
We are forever on a rocky ride,
We are tumbling towards the oceans ground
We are, we are.
Author notes
"I've got a lovely bunch of coconuts" haha luv it
Turbulent Skies by Ylova Hamdan
A contest entry
- Options, options and yes, some more options! =) by chilali.
900 points, ended December 11, 2008, 32 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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An excellent flow to this poem I like the pacing of it
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What a great take on the picture. I loved this. Nice and short
Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.
Much love
Ylova
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Thanx babes for the HM in ya contest
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We are
perhaps a train ride away from a collision and impending diseaster. I am, I said
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