Nonsense and commonsense
Are brothers separated at birth
Remember when the sun
Revolved around the earth?
And now it seems they say the earth revolves around the sun
And for now I will believe them
But it wouldn't be the first
Time they got it wrong
I think they do it on purpose
But you can't fool me
I keep my iceblocks in the furnace.
Author notes
For a contest
A contest entry
- IF YOU LIKE UNIQUE, COME HERE, EVERYONE WELCOMED by badnovocaine.
900 points, ended December 3, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Write a Short Silly Poem - Paying It Forward Contest by poetrandy.
1000 points, ended December 15, 2008, 35 entries
Honorable mention
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What did you think
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I love the intermixed creativity and comedy in this piece, and how you seem to be pushing against every rational decision with a decision of your own. It's a little short, but it's still good for the small amount of poetry you've done.
I wish you the best of luck, and keep writing and improving your poetry. ^__^
Aeris Silverlight
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Thank you for entering my contest. This poem kind of reminds me that the only thing you can be sure of is that you can't be sure of anything.
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well done
a great read
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Cute!
11 lines, but I'll let it go this time, only! Good luck in the contest!
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Oh my this is awesome!!! I loved every word of this, I really liked how in the beginning you stated that:
Nonsense and commonsense
Are brothers separated at birth
Haha I read that and my first thought was like humm I have never thought about that but yet its so true, sometimes the things that don't make sense, do.... if you know what I mean.
There was a lot of creativity about this that I liked, and you ended this really well. I could feel a sense of humor in this one.
Great job here. You can also enter two more times if you like
Thanks for entering.
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God you killed me with this one!
Ilove it, love it! Honestly
Good Luck Luv
I Really hope you win this one!
You deserve it
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