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I hate....

I hate this boy,
who is a bitch,
he didn't bother avoiding me,
when I was in a lesson.



Now he won't say sorry,
and he keeps having a go at me,
but really he should say sorry,
Oh I HATE this boy.

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Actually true

What are the good points and bad points. How can I improve.

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  • iguana54
    November 24, 2008
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    how am I a bunny?


  • iguana54
    November 24, 2008
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    ...

    joking aside, im violently hurt.


  • iguana54
    November 24, 2008
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    anyway, if u hate me then why should i bother sayin sorry...


  • iguana54
    November 24, 2008
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    what! im not avin a go...


  • Maxboy gold member
    November 20, 2008
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    Very good, I am sure you will think of a way, to teach him some manners.


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