Dreams begin,
mind wanders.
Facing reality,
future resolved!
A contest entry
- In eight words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 20, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How does this make you feel and can you relate to this
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a lot said in few words... x
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For just 8 words, this is lovely!
best wishes in your contest.
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nice take for the prompt . . good luck in the contest !!
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You nailed it, so good while staying within the rules.
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I like how you have given the total process from the beginning of a dream, to the future resolved.
Best wishes in the contest
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Oh what a wonderful ending this poem gives. Full of hope. Sometimes facing reality can be such a pain tho
Best of luck in the contest
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