under the canopy
of whispers
I await thee
A contest entry
- In eight words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 20, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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whoo who
my kind of write a thousand pages in eight words
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Wow... Beautifully done!!!
So much expressed in so few words as to leave the reader contemplative & enthralled...
Well penned, well versed, well done!!!
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very good, this has agreat chance of 'fame', well done
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Very clever and imaginative use of so few words - oodles of talent is shown here!
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This is so beautiful and touching. I can almost see you waiting underneath the canopy with this poem here.
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the canopy of whispers ~ I like that!.. x
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