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Peace

 

Flying with broken wings,
nature sings -
creating peace.

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A contest entry

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  • Ylova silver member
    December 11, 2008

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    A stunning write! Well done! Keep it flowing

    Much love
    Ylova


  • Beauty Of Silence
    November 29, 2008
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    oh wow this is beautiful. i enjoyed the read. very peaceful and gentle. keep penning


  • poetryality silver member
    November 21, 2008

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    What a peaceful arrangement of words poet. I have flown with "bronken wings" before. When they mend, they intensify in strength! Beautiful!


    Much Love & Respect ♥

    Renee


  • Victory Gin
    November 20, 2008
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    Gorgeous!

  • Titus gold member
    November 20, 2008
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    such a peace loving person, I can see here, wrote this.

  • MysteriousStrangerX
    November 20, 2008

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    wow...really good stuff...better than mine haha

    good luck!

  • Maxboy gold member
    November 20, 2008

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    Your words are wonderful.


    Best wishes in the contest


  • myrataal gold member
    November 20, 2008
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    Beautiful Words ...

    to bring hope. Well done!

    Love
    Myra


  • Lavender Butterfly gold member
    November 20, 2008
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    so beautifully drawn... x
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