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Enlightenment

Amid the pit of darkness,
hope will prevail!

A contest entry

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  • ScreaminMime
    November 26, 2008

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    Re: Enlightenment by FaeQueen

    Roses are red,
    and then comes the slapping.

    A voice calls from the pit,
    "what is the sound of one hand clapping?"


  • poetryality silver member
    November 21, 2008

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    Yes it will! HOPE has, and will continue to "prevail"!

    Your poem is hopeful and sheds light in the darkest areas of our lives. Excellent!


    Much Love & Respect ♥

    Renee


  • Kari gold member
    November 20, 2008

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    Hey this reminds me of Sparta and the movie 300!
    I have no earthly idea why lol. I loved the ending of this and the feeling of hope it leaves.
    Best of luck in the contest


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 20, 2008
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    very enlightening... x