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False Promise

Love
So many people thinks it's a game
And love
Too many people try to play
Love is not a phone call in the night
And love is not a promise to hold you tight
Love is so much more than false games
And love sometimes makes you insane
Love is that kiss in the rain
And love is holding hands today
Love is when you only think of him
Love is when smile as you think of her
Love.....is when you feel the pain as you seperate
Love.....is when it hurts so bad you stay awake
Love is when your heart is always at a fast pace
And you want to sing all over the place
Love is when you know the ins and outs of your other half
When you've been together so long that you know the math
Love is such a gift of trust that some waste
Yet love is something we all want to taste

However if I am not in love what's mine is mine
And no sweet promises will change my mind
For if I trust a friend with my heart more than he
I should keep my heart do you not agree

Author notes

An old friend is back in my life and I don't want to be used and left

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  • Expression
    November 20, 2008
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    I AGREE.....PPL SHOULDNT BE USED...BUT UHHH WHO IS THIS PERSON


  • Lady Purple
    November 20, 2008
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    Man dang but I do understand how u feel. Great write tho


  • PurpleEmoFoofCheese
    November 20, 2008

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    Your poem brought tears to my eyes~
    I relate.

    No one should ever be used.
    Love is not a game.

    But most people nowadays neglact to realize that love is so much more than what their ignorant minds concieve it to be.

    I am scared i may never feel love the same way i used to.
    But the guy i was with, played those emotions out to his advantage, and i fell for it.

    So maybe i wasn't feeling love.

    In any case, back to your poem. You convey feelings of pain, and unberable anger. You made everything you felt very clear. It was so overwhelming, i am still very close to crying.

    You are very talented. Thank you for the great read.

    ~Aly


  • haze101
    November 20, 2008

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    i agree because if he did it once its likely to happen again. stick with the life you now have and leave this old guy out of it