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Becoming Whole

I stand there,
healing,
repairing,
and becoming,
whole.

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and becoming,
whole.

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  • poetryality silver member
    November 21, 2008

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    Yes! A very prolific work here poet. I see this! I see this in your words, and the graphic art. You captured the picture well with these words.

    A replenising work! I feel refreshed. THANK YOU!


    Much Love & Respect ♥

    Renee


  • Kari gold member
    November 20, 2008

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    I can see that happening with this picture. Being whole in life is so very important that not even ppl do it enough.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 20, 2008
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    deeply profound... x