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Come

The sun has come
to set me free.

A contest entry

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  • poetryality silver member
    November 21, 2008

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    Simplicity at its finest! These eight simple words paint a wondrous picture in my mind. Excellent! I love the title, it calls to me!


    Much Love ♥


    Renee


  • Quabben
    November 20, 2008
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    Excellent

    Eight words that fit the picture well. Good stuff.


  • lil sasxx
    November 20, 2008
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    nice


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 20, 2008
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    simple yet so meaningful... x