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oh my life.

You told me it was pure
that this was meant to be, but so was she
4 years old, too young
I was the love of your life
you never told me about HER
4 years old, too young
makes you too old
I made you my life, she was yours
4 years old, too young
I could not compete
your daughter was only
4 years old, too young
for a father that lied
how did you not tell me about her
4 years old, too young
your daughter was your true love
not me, but u didn't even tell me about her


We dated for 2 years.  She was 4. 
How could you not have told me?
Let me to find out on Father's Day?
She was four.  I was 18.  That's wrong.

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ash-es Don't Make Someone A Priority In Your Life When You Are An Option In Their's

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  • Draig aine gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    congrats on the write


  • Anu-Nataraj
    November 21, 2008
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    very well written poet..
    amazing write !

    good luck in the contest and life


  • lovesky
    November 20, 2008
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    Really sad poem about being lied to by someone you loved!
    Written really well