You told me it was pure
that this was meant to be, but so was she
4 years old, too young
I was the love of your life
you never told me about HER
4 years old, too young
makes you too old
I made you my life, she was yours
4 years old, too young
I could not compete
your daughter was only
4 years old, too young
for a father that lied
how did you not tell me about her
4 years old, too young
your daughter was your true love
not me, but u didn't even tell me about her
We dated for 2 years. She was 4.
How could you not have told me?
Let me to find out on Father's Day?
She was four. I was 18. That's wrong.
Author notes
ash-es Don't Make Someone A Priority In Your Life When You Are An Option In Their's
A contest entry
- Epigram Quickie Prompt by Anu-Nataraj.
450 points, ended November 21, 2008, 5 entries
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Comments
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congrats on the write


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very well written poet..
amazing write !
good luck in the contest and life

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Really sad poem about being lied to by someone you loved!
Written really well



