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Den Puppy earthstar

I miss you deeply, life is not the same for me
When I  get a message from you, it light my face into a smile
Thought are friendship was growing we talked when we could
I miss you from my heart
I miss you from my soul
I miss you more the words would ever echo
Even now I think of  you as my mother
Now you are needed ever more
Please bring me into you den
Teach me,  help me by listening
I hope you know my heart will gladly share you good days
In the midst of a dark night I will bring the puffs and tea to listen

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  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    November 25, 2008

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    This is a touching write, one of reaching out and yearning to connect, to belong and to be loved and appreciated as well. We all share these feelings to some degree. "It is not good for man to dwell alone", we need to interact and and be a part of something bigger than ourselves. Thanks for sharing this thoughtful write, one to read and ponder.

    Brother Dennis


  • StarEyes
    November 20, 2008

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    B~

    This is wonderful! It is nice to read something from you again. It has been a while I know, Sorry. I really enjoyed this as the first poem I read this morning!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • WolfHeart
    November 20, 2008

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    My darling child - how good it is to reaffirm our relationship, putting us back on track with each other.
    I care for you deeply and think of you often.