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Thin

Dying to be thin

Bones

Nothing but skin stretched across a skeleton

I know I look terrible

But I can't help it

Feel so fat

So weak

Tired

More exercise, more

The ache means its working, pounds melting away

60

50

40

30

Not skinny enough, still fat, so fat

Fine hair over my body

Too cold, so cold

Hair falling out

So tired, so tired

Now  I lay me down to sleep
I give to Ana my soul to keep
And when I die before I wake
I give to Ana my soul to take

Anorexia is a serious disease. If you or someone you know has Anorexia, please, please get help.

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  • Poetically Meli
    March 15, 2009

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    OMG....!

    Very strong. I like it!

    It also makes the disease more... solid. Thanks for putting up your own sign against Anorexia, dudette! If more people read this, I'm sure that they would agree -- it is a horrifying thing.

    ~Meli♥
    *gives applauses*


  • LilEmoPrincess
    November 20, 2008

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    very powerfull poem and what an insperation i think its great you wrote this to make ppl awear of how dangerus it really is.