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Every New Tear

You traced every scar with your finger tips
And kisssed every new cut with your trembling lips
I swear I counted every new tear that spilled down
And I thought my heart broke when I saw you frown
You quietly asked me why I did that
And I looked away because I was scared of that
Someone who cared and was close enough to hold me
As the tears that dripped down my cheek
You looked in my eyes as you hugged me close
Wanted me to always know
I had someone to care even if I feel so alone
i will never again be on my own
Why don't I quit and just walk away
You waited to hear what lies I would say
No big deal and other shit, the typical lies
Instead I just slowly met your eyes
Im scared and alone and to weak to go on
I act on the outside to be so strong
And its easier said than it is done
Sometimes I wonder if Im the only one
You took my hand and kissed my forehead so softly
"Chelsea please wont you quit for me?"

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  • fake-or-real-smile
    December 14, 2008
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    Love the last few lines of this.

    Amazing write.

    well done.

    X


  • ButiiLoveHiim
    November 19, 2008

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    I love it!! i can relate to that. to think your fighting a battle alone with nobody to help.
    great write (Y)