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feminine fatalities

 

 

 

Gently stirred,

not shaken

is a fine womans destiny.

 

Sipped half-full or bottoms up,

tenderly defines

her tastes of reality.

 

Whether she be...

a soul of vermouth

or sweet tasting rum.

 

One thing,

we women do agree;

a loving man is the best champagne

or bitter-sweet martini,

sipped half-ful or bottoms up.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

contest prompt: pleasure and pain make a great martini Second Prompt for contest!

picture credit: butterysweet@glittergraphics.com talented artistry!

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  • Angelflower
    December 11, 2008

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    Bravo!! I truly loved this! you did a rockin' job with the prompt! yeah! lol. thank you very much for sharing this crazy good poem! best of luck in the contest!

    Angel


  • stavykm gold member
    November 25, 2008

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    Kinda Funny

    Oh I loved this one. This is just a beautiful poem. I love the picture and you did a fabulous job writing for this. Best wishes in the contest. Excellently penned.

    Wishing You Many Blessings
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie


  • georgie
    November 20, 2008

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    so much for my recovery from alcohol lol. just kiddin... not craving atm. this was a beautifully put piece... goes wonderfully with the prompt... i've definitely got the best champagne and its free and i dont even need a glass
    hugs,
    georgie,
    xxx


  • lunarlunacy
    November 19, 2008
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    enjoyably witty


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 19, 2008

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    this is a great poem, reminds me of the spirit movie coming out soon, i mean you did a great job on this, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Nature Song silver member
    November 19, 2008

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    Well "I hate gin so martini's are out...but rum and vodka are fine! Not shaken...just finely poured! Bottoms up dear poet this write was sensational! ~Sie

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