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hungrey eyes

watching, craving your body
yet unknown, the lust i feel
how i want to taste your lips
to see you as a man, hardened in my view

i want to know what your body, every curve, every muscle
to slid my fingers though your hair
and down your back, caressing it all

i want to pull you close
and taste your lips
feeding my desire
seeing the lust
in your eyes

everlasting tension
everlasting dream


a wold yet unsaid
i only see what is before me
as a lonely heart, and a erotic dream
feelings unsaid
and  dreams un-lived

Author notes

this poem is about a friend of mine that i really like but far too shy to tell him, and i have a fiancee so ya keep this one under wrap



-hystaria

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  • The D O M
    December 22, 2008
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    This is charming discrete and exactly what I was looking for