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Internal Storm

Night air chills ya to the bone
Reminding one that they are alone
TV playing
Oblivious to the noise
Just aware of the voices rising to the emptiness of the silence

Mind drifts in and out of coherrant thought
Internal fear from the pain
Reminds one that something isn't right

Trusting God  for guidance and comfort
As the stillness of the night
Comes to consume her to a restless sleep

In the wee hours of the morning she rises
Trying to put her restlessness at bay
Longing for the comfort of warm arms to hold her
And a shoulder upon which to lay her head
To hear the beat of a steady heart

She gazes out the window
At the stars as they twinkle
Against the blanket night sky

Reminding her that the current storm will pass
That hope once again will give her the courage within
That she feels she is lacking

That the darkness will fade to the light of brighter tomorrows
Where her smile will radiate against the grayest sky
And her dreams will be fullfilled

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  • gullionmar
    January 3
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    very good

    sister this is well written keepup the goog work


  • dustookie2
    November 27, 2008

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    It amazes just what comes to pass in the darkness of the night how questions are answered and solutions found...tomorrow is our future of today and today is but a memory of yesterday. There is wisdom within your line the words of inspiration come to mind that when all storms the sun will shine and if it gets too much then we should just give it up in words and ask for some help. Never know what the answer will be may even surprise us. June am sure I commented on this before am guessing my computer did a number on me and me off.


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 20, 2008

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    SO TRUE!!!

    I believe each of us have gone through this many times in our lives. We fight this battle inside of our own hearts and souls .'s

  • gullionmar
    November 20, 2008

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    BEAUTIFULL

    SIS THIS IS SO TRUE OF LIFE WHEN WE WE ARE ALONE AND LONG FOR SOMEONE TO HOLD US .BUT GOD WILL LET IS HAPPEN AGAIN JUST TRUST AND OBEY SIS GOD LOVES YOU SO DO WE