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Mascara

Maybelline, Cover Girl,
Dior-Diorshow, Mary Kay,
Black & Brown & also Gray
Full Lash Volume, Waterproof
With luscious lashes, eyes go
POOF!
Thicken, Lengthen & define
Estee Lauder’s No. 9
Mascara wands poke your eye,
Tears come faster than a raining sky.
Clumps & smudging,
Different brands; You’ll be judging.
About six dollars for a bottle,
Oh my gosh,
You look like a model!! :]

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Weeeell.
Just another poem of mine. Same thing.
Not deeper meaning, no nothing,
Just an obvious Mascara poem

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  • puffydog1824
    November 23, 2008

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    aww this is cute mimi! I cant believe u dont like this! and even tho it took about 6mins doesnt mean it sucks lol. i think it deserves 3 clappy things lol


    • Aquarius
      November 25, 2008
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      Thank you, young one.
      Little kids are so appreciative these days, huh?


  • Lulu28
    November 22, 2008
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    lol cute mimi! it made me giggle! thank u!

    • Aquarius
      November 22, 2008
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      Well mascara makes eyes look bigger, like this--> so yay


  • FieryHollow
    November 20, 2008

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    ?!?!?!?

    This was cute... but I must find the deeper meaning to it! I will investigate for so long that by the time I'm done, I'll be done... literally XP KaPOOF Dead, Zilch, corpse, cadaver, scrap tissue, eh? First, I'll raid your room and search and search and search for some deeper meaning that you may have written down! I'll go through your drawers, shelves, and books! I must know! Then, if nothing is found, I'll stalk you at school, pretending to be shadowing, and see if I can catch of little blip of the deeper meaning when you talk with someone else about it. AHA! That's it! You just don't want to tell me what the deeper meaning is! I feel so dejected, how could you do that to me. I am going to into the emo-corner now, thanks! LONEEEEELLLYYYYYYYYYYYYY, I'M SO LONELYYYYYYYYYYYYY, I'VE GOT NOBODYYYYYYY TO CALL MY OWN ---***[[[OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH]]]***---. -boom the window slams I can no longer sing- tehe. Just kidding, I took now offense. But, I will find the deeper meaning, you best sleep with one eye open and your mind shut, else I'll invade your head with a needle and suck the information out of you! MWAHAHAHH What's this whole thing about anyway, what made you decide to write about mascara, hmm? Why are there so many brands of mascara? Hmm, I wonder. I should do a research project about ti! But wait! Curiosity killed the cat and got Alice in a lot of trouble with the White Rabbit and Queen! Wait, it must be an anagram for something! By writing this about mascara, it must be about looks, and looks are related to models. You're going to go model in the Philippines now, AREN'T YOU! I knew it, you are leaving, me! This is what it's all come down to. You wrote a poem about mascara, which improves your looks, models have good looks, and you're going to be a mascara model in the Philippines without even saying goodbye to me. LONEEEEELLLYYYYYYYYYYYYY, I'M SO LONELYYYYYYYYYYYYY, I'VE GOT NOBODYYYYYYY TO CALL MY OWN ---***[[[OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH]]]***--- tehe. It's all good in the hood, this was another good one, I hope you enjoyed reading my little comment on your poem and its secret message ... which I will discover!!!!

    ~Whit


    • Aquarius
      November 20, 2008
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      Omg, Whitney. You got it.
      I can't believe it.
      Truth is, I AM going to be a Model in the Philippines
      I thought it'd be easier to just write this poem instead of saying goodbye. I knew s smart kid like you could eventually get it.
      & I even knew you'd sing that song. I knew it, I knew it!

      ...& you never did have anyone to call you're own Unless you're a slave driver & I never knew about it mawhahaa

      & You can gladly follow me to school I want you to meet some people I hate. Then one day I want to go to your school to see the lights flicker on & off by themselves.

      & This poem does NOT deserve 3 's... No Way. That is ridiculous! I spent like 6 minutes on this. & Half that time, I was looking up brands of mascara

      Thanks for the comment, I loved reading it

      • Aquarius
        November 20, 2008
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        Hey, my picture looks really creepy.
        I just realized that.
        Wow. I'm weird.

        • Lulu28
          November 22, 2008
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          lol mimi ur pic is beautiful!


          • Lulu28
            November 22, 2008
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            oh my gosh i just relized my eyes in this pic look like mr parms, like how they go back inside his head like they r in a bowl or somthing lol
            ewwww


          • Lulu28
            November 22, 2008
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            lol i dont look model-ish!
            but yes mascara was a part of it
            lilly flynn like did my whole face
            it was cool but like after a while it was ewww my face feels heavy
            well not heavy but just like weird


            • Aquarius
              November 22, 2008
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              AHahaha I know what ya mean
              But anyone who wears mascara looks like a model
              Even hideous mortally obese people with split ends & faces that look like pugs.


              • Lulu28
                November 22, 2008
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                if u r talking about u u look nothing like a pug. at all! u are very beautiful mimi!


                • Lulu28
                  November 22, 2008
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                  AHAHHAA OPPS! im dumb i didnt read the obese part! and ur not fat or pug like lmao! and i dont notice the split ends!
                  lol i feel increadibly stupid right now! haha but i like pugs they r wonderful!



                  OH GUESS WHT! BELLA(my cat) IS PREGO! we didnt think she was but she keeps getting bigger! my dad wants my mom to take the cat while shes prego but my mom thinks oscar and salem will hurt her


                  • Aquarius
                    November 22, 2008
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                    AHAHAHAH Well, I dont really like pugs. They breath EXTREMELY loud & it REALLY ticks me off. Then they are so short & small & "bdilsghkrdlf."



                    AHHHH!!!! I NEED TO SEE KITTTENS AGAIN! IM KITTEN DEPRIVED! My cat had like 20 litters & shes fixed & I havent seen little babies since 2 years ago.
                    Please have them soon
                    Well I know it wont be soon but yeah


                • Aquarius
                  November 22, 2008
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                  ...um, no not me. lol.
                  Well, first- I'm not MORTALLY obese! HAHAA
                  Second... well, actually, I DO have split ends.
                  Third- my nose is nothing like a pug lmao. It isnt pushed into my face. I mean, like for example... a pug nose...
                  You know hte girl Im like, "WILL NOT BE IN OUR DC GROUP!"
                  She has a PUG NOSE


          • Aquarius
            November 22, 2008
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            Haha, look whose talking.
            You're picture looks model-ish.
            Just like the poem says...
            "About six dollars for a bottle,
            Oh my gosh,
            You look like a model!! :] "

            I'm guessing mascara is a part of your picture, eh?

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