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It's Only in My Head



staring into the mirror and not recognizing me

angry at the face I now see

my mind wanders off as I pull out my hair

shocked to realize the massive piles lying here and there

pretending to be young again

talking to no one, no...wait, no one is my friend

hate myself for getting fat

it keeps spreading with age, what's up with that?

the more I try, the louder my mind screams

voices in my head always interrupting sleepy dreams

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    November 20, 2008

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    wow. Were you looking at me in that mirror, my dear sister, because I could've written this piece! You've penned an emotional beauty here! Good luck in the contest!


  • Guerrero
    November 20, 2008
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    wow..very good job..another amazing peice