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Just a Game

Let this feeling go
      (this time i'll say no)
Gotta try to breathe
Gotta try to leave...

But I can't say bye
      (but I'll have to try)
Don't you know what's true?
Don't you know it's you?

Heart caught in a trap
      (waiting 'til it snaps)
Won't you take the pain?
Won't you call my name?

Why don't you call my name?
      -never be the same-

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    November 21, 2008
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    I think in the second line you need to capitalise the 'i' ... these are interesting lyrics - a short song - but one that I bet you can't get out of your head I really like the release of this song ... I hope you are feeling alright

    Keep writing

    Polly