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A Light Shall Shine

The dark now hides the many folk who walk there day by day,
Beneath the shadow cast by death that hides their homeward way.

But some day, so the promise tells, the darkness will be rent,

The chosen ones will have the light a loving God has sent.

As harvest feasts are filled with joy, so shall all Israel be.

As plund’ring warriors share the spoils and dance about with glee.

For chains that held the nation fast, and scourging whips are gone,

And wars and battles disappear, and peace goes on and on.

A babe will bring this time to pass, a gift then giv’n to all,

Is sent to earth to save the ones who’re lost through Adam’s fall.

The Prince of Peace, the Counselor, who’ll rule forever more,

With justice from King David’s throne, will lead to heaven’s door.

So celebrate at Christmas time, and sing out clear and loud,

And join the heav’nly army as that huge angelic crowd

Who sang the glory on that night when Christ was sent to earth,

And heaven’s glory shown around, announcing Jesus’ birth.

Author notes

Based on Isaiah 9:2-7

Written to be read at our church during the advent season.

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  • Claireabelle-
    December 2, 2008
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    youre good


  • Arrianna MacEwan
    November 28, 2008

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    This is such a breathtaking work Grampa. Everything is perfect, rhyme, flow, meter. Perfect. I almost cried too


  • Joseph Hollis
    November 22, 2008

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    You've captured the true spirit of Christmas here. This is a wonderfully uplifting and spiritual write. The rhyme scheme is simple and effectively conveys the message. Thanks for sharing.

  • Malzy
    November 21, 2008

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    Hey poppy
    I know I havent been around much, a lot going on, but thats a different story. This is an amazing poem, its very well written and as always youve managed to make a poem that rhymes without it sounding forced or cheesy.
    Im sure itll sound great being read at your church. You should be proud of yourself poppy because I sure am, Im very proud
    Love ya always
    Malzy


  • Nature Song silver member
    November 20, 2008

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    What a lovely idea. This is awesome. Words cannot express my feeling you have created here. Kirby you have really outdone yourself with this one.

    Come join in his heavely army as one angelic voice.

    Yes indeed. ~Sie


  • suseann
    November 20, 2008

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    BRAVO!

    Absolutely fabulous! It holds all that is heaven's gift in Christ.This should be and merits news media publication.

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