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what are you?

impulse
are you a blessing or hindurance
equalizer or destroyer
safety net or annoyer
impulse
pulses as I sleep
wiggles through my teeth
urging me to rise back to my feet 
impulse
without you I can't react
if heavily relied upon
I may wake up wondering where I'm at
impulse

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  • written-in-ink
    November 24, 2008

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    man i think that we all want to know this
    and i think we all want to know what anything is truely down to the bottom of it all
    =]]

    very nice poem
    thank you and good luck in the contest
    =]]


  • chloeleigh
    November 19, 2008
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    wow, this is incredible, and it would really do well as a spoken word piece, if you're into that