Diminishing Fears At your grasp,
Exhaling Thinned air now
Miniscule Fibres Carressing
Nose clipping nose.
A Tender Touch
Connection,
A Key My Beauty Holds.
Perfection.
Sweet Dreams My Angel
Forever my night be satisfied
Our minds now one
Lips Apart.
Author notes
"Miniscule Fibres Carressing" - hairs on face meeting
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I love this. Really good.
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I like this write.
The ending line is good. I'd maybe add more to the middle lines. Perhaps describe this "perfection". Overall, good!
p.s. thanks for the comment on my poem!
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I like the depth and clarity of this write.
It's well penned, and draws visions of 'perfection' upon the canvas of my mind.
Bravo
'D'
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i liked the first line of diminishing the fear of what it will be like, and the revealing that it was beautiful in the words 'forever my night be satisfied'. .. a tender touch connection indeed.
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I love it!
It's really wonderful. -
made me smile!
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ooooooooo someone's got talent!
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i love this one it was very...informative.
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I think it's great keep up writing.
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