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Open My Heart

The road has been so cold
I’ve traveled so far.
At times I don’t think I’ll ever know,
only emptiness in every bar.

I need you beside me,
to love and guide me.
Open my heart so that I might feel,
show me that love can be real.

So many lies,
too many playing a game.
He said, she said,
in the end no one willing to take the blame.

I want you to show me love that is real,
Let me entrust you with my battered heart
so that it might begin to heal.
Let us together find the paths that love gave a start.

I need you beside me,
to love and guide me.
Open my heart so that I might feel,
show me that love can be real.

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I picked I Want To Know What Love Is

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  • plainoljoe
    February 14, 2009

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    perhaps a little 'preachy' on my part, but the one you need beside you has always been there---just look upward.

    I've travelled many lonely roads and learned I've never been alone

    Joe


  • Riftkin gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    Thank you for your take of the song that you picked. this poem brought a smile to my lips. Best of luck to you in my contest.

    Riftkin