I know sometimes that life is hard but we will make it through.
I wouldn’t have made it this far if it hadn’t been for you.
You love me for just who I am and that’s very new to me.
You’re a great person and what others don’t, you see.
Im sorry you put up with me and all my crazy ways,
But I promise i’ll be here for you always through the days.
I wanna thank you for everything you didn’t have to do,
But I know you’ll say its nothing cause that’s just you.
But you really have changed my life and I thank god everyday,
Cause he sent me a special angel to help me find my way.
I’ll walk this path of life with you and catch you when you fall.
With a friend like you beside me we can make it through it all.
I love you!
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I like it!
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The rhyme and flow is flawless; thankyou for entering and good luck
Maria
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CONGRATULATIONS
Loved This Write!! xx -
Love this!
I have a friend like this.
"I know sometimes that life is hard but we will make it through.
I wouldn’t have made it this far if it hadn’t been for you.
You love me for just who I am and that’s very new to me.
You’re a great person and what others don’t, you see.
Im sorry you put up with me and all my crazy ways,
But I promise i’ll be here for you always through the days."
Love it... Great write.
Thanks for entering, good luck! x
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I like it! It's a cute poem with a nice rhyming scheme that's fun to read! Thanks for entering, and good luck!
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AWHHHHHH
This was a beautiful tribute to a friend and you put your feelings out there in a beautiful way.
YAY!
mummy xoxox
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What a beautiful poem, I had a friend like that, I miss her everyday, but I was so blessed to have her in my life for 25 years.
The flow and rhyme is wonderful.
Thank you for entering my contest.
Well done.
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Love it
I love the flow and wonderful message that was obviously inspired. Well done!
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I felt me in this too, how people tell me what you wrote, because I really try to be a good friend, help and nurturer...you really appreciate your friend in this piece...lovely...blessings
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Great rhyme and flow!
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This was crazy cool
Beautiful
The rhyme was perfect, not forced.
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aww. i think this is simply beautiful. its gorgeous, and your words were so lovely sweet, innocent and purely stunning work. keep penning. it ws a pleasure to read
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wonderfully written. nice rhyme and great poem.
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This is so beautifully written. I have a friend that I feel the same way about. great job
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Wow, this is a very good poem. It's nice to see those rare occasions when people appreciate those that inspire them and push them onward.
Loved the rhyme and I could see the genuine emotion.
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